克莱默夫妇

风格提示词

认真的六到八岁孩子在白纸上画的蜡笔画。蜡笔只蹭到纸纹凸起；轻涂露出四到六成纸白，用力处填满；叠色时下层透出。轮廓用黑色或深棕蜡笔，蜡质、发抖，粗约画面宽的 1/300。填色是来回涂抹，每笔长约画面宽的 1/40、宽约 1/250，一排排涂、冲出轮廓，每块各有方向，间距和角度不均匀，不能排成规整的网。基础色：红 #E0382C、橙 #F28A1E、黄 #F7D23A、绿 #3AA345、蓝 #2E6BD8。儿童画惯例：地面线、压扁的透视、带箭头的标注、笑脸太阳、写反一个字母（中文写反一个偏旁）、图案一格格涂。文字用用户的语言、发抖的蜡笔笔画写，不用字体。镜头：先晃动近景，再平稳扫过全画。避免：大人式的工整画法、没细节的乱涂、均匀点状或网状肌理、平滑渐变。

English:

A careful 6–8-year-old's wax-crayon drawing on white paper. Crayon catches the paper grain's peaks; light pressure leaves 40–60% paper showing, heavy pressure fills it; overlaps show through. Outlines in black or dark-brown crayon, waxy, wobbling, about 1/300 of frame width. Fills are back-and-forth scribbles, strokes about 1/40 of frame width long and 1/250 wide, rows overshooting the outlines, each area in its own direction, spacing and angle uneven, never a regular mesh. Primary box: red #E0382C, orange #F28A1E, yellow #F7D23A, green #3AA345, blue #2E6BD8. Child conventions: a ground line, flattened perspective, arrowed labels, a smiling sun, one mirrored letter (in Chinese, a reversed stroke), patterns coloured cell by cell. Text in the user's language, in wobbly crayon strokes, not a typeface. Camera: shaky close-ups, then a calm drift. Avoid: neat adult rendering, random scrawl, uniform stipple or mesh, smooth gradients.

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技法关键词

纹理纸上的蜡笔,6–8 岁儿童画的画法,手写标签

导演说明

Clawd 扮泰德：系着蓝色围裙带，拿锅铲；比利站在椅子上打蛋。第一次和最后一次用同一口锅做匹配剪辑，父子关系在一次跳切里讲完。整体约 1.35 倍速；切进全景时正好接住吐司，接着小跳一下、看一眼镜头。

成片里的分镜

1. 第一次做的平底锅大特写：焦吐司、黑色蜡笔烟、蛋壳；手持抖动，慢慢拉开。（0.7s）
2. 匹配剪辑到片尾的同一口锅，干干净净：一片金黄的吐司从锅里翻起来。（0.4s）
3. 标题“ME AND DADDY MAKE FRENCH TOAST”下父子并肩：Clawd 用锅铲接住吐司，比利笑开，冒出一颗红心，Clawd 得意地小跳一下；镜头往上漂到窗外的蜡笔天际线。（1.4s）

参考出处

Robert Benton, Kramer vs. Kramer (1979),Néstor Almendros (cinematography),Kramer vs. Kramer one-sheet (1979),Children's drawings, ages 6–8